A succinct clearly-described script, Katy. Good. I noticed this typo: *B cells are seen sitting bellow it* - should be 'below' Now, what you need to think about is your visual strategy for putting this script on screen; for example, the detection/capture scenes - these are 'action' sequences or suspense scenes, so I suggest you look at movies etc. for additional ideas about how to structure your story further. Good stuff, Katy - keep it coming. The more organised/prepared you are, the more positive your last 4 weeks of term will be!