I think its getting there, but I think the face need work - he looks a little like a human wearing a beak mask at the moment. I think you need to look closely at bird head anatomy. Also i think his proportions are a little bland and "average human" like - i think you need top push his basic constructional shapes more. The costume is getting there, but still feels a little tame. Rather than a generic lighting shape, i think the team probably need some form of logo - they are a gang afterall. And I think you need a little more scifi, so think what high tech gear they could own.